Good morning.
8ELA
-Pink questions are due today so I want to give you some things to think about and reminders.
1. If you refer to someone who believes in Christ, you need a capital C as in Christian.
2. Title bars with INTERESTING and UNIQUE titles are necessary.
3. Get the character names correct: Maria not Mari, Carlo not Carla.
4. Eight sentences--not 10--eight are required. This will force you to look long and hard at what you've written to decide what's valuable and what can be removed. Do not have run-on sentences to fit within the eight sentence guideline--again, get rid of information that is repetitive or not helpful.
5. Use the semi-colon (;). This can be used to combine sentences without using a period. For instance: Life during this global pandemic has been very strange; people are hoarding household supplies, parents are school teachers, and businesses around the world have closed. Notice how the two halves of the sentence are similar--the second half builds on the first half. You could not write: Life during this global pandemic has been very strange; I saw a full moon last night. Obviously, these two halves have nothing in common. Use the semi-colon in your writing to allow for longer sentences BUT do not create a sentence that's really, really long and I have to catch my breath to read the whole thing (run-on).
5. Quotes are necessary for SOME or all of your ideas and personal life experience is okay too; this means you can have two ideas with quotes and one idea with life experience and no quote. You CANNOT have all three ideas based on life experience--you must reference the novel. Transition phrases are very important--use them.
6. Proofread, proofread, proofread.
-Have someone at home read your work out loud and you listen--you will hear the missing /misused/overused words and catch problems with grammar. Ask someone at home for thoughts on your paper; they will probably say: It's good. Ask them what's good about it. Make someone tell you what you did well--you would in the classroom so do it at home.
-Send your work to a classmate for review. Don't worry about someone using your ideas--similar topics have similar ideas so I don't worry about that. I do get concerned when people have identical phrases, though. Your classmates have been reading the same book as you and thinking deeply about the same ideas; have them check your paragraph to see if it makes sense. You would in the classroom so do it at home.
-Send in your paragraphs today.
8SS
-We continue learning about Islam. The following students need to send in their Islamic Expansion homework today: 8M-Dara, Maya, James, JE, Athena, Sesinna, Aiden, Naod, Samuel, Emily and 8B-Israel, Josh, Gabbi, Sara, Nina, Eric, Allycia, Sherah-Mae, Livia.
7SS
-We continue learning about Democracy. The following students need to send in their Remembrance Day homework today: Victoria, Enzo, Ethan, Kailee, Cyrus, Khrystle, Johanna, Riel, Tessa, Helena, Zac
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